A Beautiful Comment

An excerpt from their About page 🙂

Hi everyone!

Today, I’ve decided to share a comment I received on a post I did a little while ago.

The comment author is Wind Wires And Oscillations ^ ^

It’s beautiful, and deserves more than being a mere comment 🙂

I hope you enjoy!

When the winds of war cease to be …
Only then will man be free ,
But the mind must be tamed so that wars are not in name
and waste of wanton stature .
to stand atop one another for what purpose
To merely hide thine own iniquity
such is that,… that rises ….
feel the soil in your hands , and let sand run through your fingers
on the shore of some forgotten sea , lingering in the moment
long enough to see,….. the gull floating effortlessly across the crests of waves
it is that , that saves ….
that wind ….
that silent space in between what we see , and what we believe ……
And this we feel ….not achieve …..
To Achieve …. to Conquer
To ascend ,…beyond the scoffs of those beneath us …
only in spirit …… because we’ve laid the weapons down …..

Meet me on a peaceful shore , and my hands will be empty , but my heart full.


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    1. I know right!? I’m considering doing a lot more of these, some of the comments I get are so amazing… actually a certain recent comment may be getting the limelight soon… so stay tuned for that! 😉 ^ ^ 😀

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