My Future Lover
So tell me who you are
What’s your name?
Where are you?
How long is your hair?
Cause I haven’t met you yet
And I’m really hoping to soon
How old are you?
Are your eyes blue?
Will I catch your eye across a room?
Hey, are you there?
Cause I’m trying to find you
I know you’re somewhere
But I need you now
Like I need my next breath
I’m yearning for you
Every bone in my body longs for you
It’s a hunger that won’t go away
A thirst I can’t quench
I need your love
Please
Come
Soon.
~ Bluebell Rizzi
I love the light-hearted start, then the drift towards yearning and desire. A great poem. As for your future lover I do hope that you find them and are happy 🙂 🙂
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Thank you!!!!! Means so much to me to hear that ❤ I hope so too! ^ ^ ❤
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That’s really good. Sorry not to have deeper constructive feedback haha 😂😂 but it is really good!
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How is your own work coming along?
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Alright, I have lots of ideas but get a bit disheartened trying to make them ‘perfect’, because there’s always something that bothers me. But it’s so satisfying to finish one! Thanks for asking 😊
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Awwww haha THANK YOU ❤ ❤
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